Chord/Tab song: Bring on the Rain

hey evil janx here, this is my first song so go easy on me, im not sure if its correct
it sound damn close, ive been looking for these guys music everywhere but cant find it
so i desided to give it a go, vanishing point are legends !
VANISHING POINT
Bring on the rain

verse em
feel the lines, across my face
i [G]felt the many years [D]erased
em
feel the pulse on life i've known
i[G]t's sojourn tears i [D]taste

em
view into your world and see
[G]seek an unborn [D]day
em
with your heart and mind and soul
[G]your will, will find our [D]way[C]

pre chorus
C em
past left of centre, what i am
could you under[C]stand
if your the outsider viewing[D] in
( Tab from: http://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/v/vanishing_point/bring_on_the_rain_crd.html )
chorus
em C
you'll never know
G D em
the shades of life, unless you open your mind
you fear [C]change
so [G]bring [D]on the [C]rain

verse
em
is the silence, my only cure
as [G]thoughts start to [D]grey
em
your touch that covered me
G D em
now remains in yesterday

em
the sea between you and i
[G]moves in perfect forms [D]serene
em
the distance from me to you
[G]a million miles [D]unsee[C]n

well thats it theres a wicked little solo in there somewhere but im not that good yet,
gonna work on some other vanishing point now, if anyone knows more vanishing point tabs
submit them thanks. silvio is a god !
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