Chord/Tab song: Yes I Can

hey this is my first time tabbing so i hope it's ok...
hammer on- ~~~~ ( if it is just on one string ONLY hammer on that string)
intro:
D A Asus'?

E-------------------------------------3----------------------------------------
B---3-3-3-----------------------------3----------------------------------------
G---2-2-2-~~~~-4--2-----2-----2------------------------------------------------
D---0-0-0--------------0--4--2-----2-------------------------------------------
A----------------------------0--0----------------------------------------------
E------------------------------------------------------------------------------

verse:
[D] [A] [Bm][G][D]

E-----------------------------------------2-------------3--------------2-------
B--3--3--3-----------------------2--3-----3-------------0--------------3-------
G--2--2--2-----0--2-----2--2--4-----------4-----0--2----2-----0--2-----2--0----
D--0--0--0--4-----------2--2--------------4--4----------0--4--------0--0-----4-
A--------------------0--0--0-----------2--2------------------------------------
E----------------------------------------------------3-------------------------

[A] [D]

E---------------------------------------|-----0--------0-~~~~2-----------------
B--------------------do that twice------|--------3-----3-----3-----------------
G--2-----2------0----and then do this---|--2--------2--2-----2-----------------
D--2-----2---4-------after the end------|--0-----------0-----0-----------------
A-----0--------------of the second time-|--------------------------------------
E---------------------------------------|--------------------------------------

The chorus progression is this: 4 counts of D, then 4 counts of D/F# (which is
the D chord but with your thumb hold down the low E string on the 2nd fret), then
2 counts of Bm, 2 counts of A, 1 count each of: G,D/F#,Em,D, 4 counts of D, 4
counts of D/F#, 4 counts of Asus4 (which is: E--), and 4 counts of A.
[(][B-3)]
[(][G-2)]
[(][D-2)]
[(][A--)]
That's it, i haven't got the solo yet[(].....i thin[E--)]k he plays it on a ukuelele.
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