Chord/Tab song: Intension

First tab - let me know what you think. I labelled each part with a number and explained
order at the end.

Drop D

/ slide
h hammer
p pull

Part 1 (x2) 0:32

e ------------------------------------|
B ---8---7------------7---------------|
G -------------7-h9-------9-----------|
D ------------------------------------|
A ------------------------------------|
D ------------------------------------|

Part 2

e ------------------------------------|
B --------------------5---------------|
G ---7---5-----5-h7-------7-----------|
D ------------------------------------|
A ------------------------------------|
D ------------------------------------|

Part 3 (x7) 3:51

e -----------------------------------------------------------------|
B -----5-----5-----5----------5------------------------------------|
G --------7-----------7--------7----------5-------------7----------|
D ---7-----------7-----7--------7------7-------------5-------------|
A -----------------------------------------------------------------|
D -----------------------------------------------------------------|

Part 4 - 5:05

e -----------|
B -------5---|
G -----5-----|
D ---7----5--|
A -----------|
D -----------|

Part 5 (x4) 5:05

e --------------------------------------------------|
B ------5-------10------8---------------------------|
G ------------------------------10----9-------------|
D ---7------/12------10------10----10---10-- |-7--|
A --------------------------------------------------| ^
D --------------------------------------------------| Once after repeating Part 5 four times.

Part 6 - 5:27

e ------------------------|
B ------------------------|
G ------------------------|
D ---9---10-9-\5-7--------|
A -------------------0----|
D ------------------------|

Part 7 (x2)

e -------------------------------------------------------|
B -------------------------------------------------------|
G ---------------------9---------------------------------|
D ---9---10-9-\5-7--------12---9---10-9----7---5---7-----|
A -------------------0--(0)----0----------0----0---0-----|
D -------------------------------------------------------|

Part 8 (x4)

e ------------------------------|
B -----5-----5-----5---5--------|
G ---7-----------7------7-------|
D --------7--------------7 <---| On 4th repeat, replace final note with open note (0).
A ------------------------------|
D ------------------------------|

Part 9 (duo with bass which I didn't tab)

e -----------------------------------|
B -----------------------------------|
G ---7 <-about ten times----12-------|
D -----------------------------------|
A -----------------------------------|
D -----------------------------------|

Part Order:

1 (x2) (0:32)
[2]
[1]3 (x7) (3:51)
[4]5 (x4) (5:07)
6 (5:27)
7 (x2)
6 (w/o open A note)
8 (x4)
3 (x2)
[9]
[1]
[2]
There you have it. Please comment.